Quiet Poetry Lounge : i guess

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Scry'be, May 24, 2007.

  1. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i guess i wasn't
    enough of a
    melody for yo song.
    u were never
    able to fully here the
    essence of me orchestrated
    in my footsteps.
    u gon have to learn
    to un-ripen your ears
    and hear what has
    been there since
    God bore 40 rivers that
    created ur smile.



    'House of Atreus' Publishing 2007
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes we can "know" too much to see the essence. Your pen bores down to the core, wonderfully penned.
     
  3. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you mami for feeling me.
     
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    The last line is fire & soul! Nice
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaa! somehow u pin what my heart truely feel at times
     
  6. Scry'be

    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    peace and purpose to you all
     
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