Black Poetry : I GOTS.................

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LURK, Jun 4, 2004.

  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whuts up yall....i STILL didnt forget about yall....never that...

    just dig ya heard!!
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    i feel free at last,
    from lifes' dreadful hold...
    im all,loaded with gas,
    and goin down tha right road....
    i put,all of my past,
    behind me buried with wisdom,
    that'll i'll take to my grave ,Lurk 1 ,no longer a slave.....

    for tha knowledge that i hold,
    is something i should give 'em....
    cause when,times were rough and cold,
    and I had my mind troubled ina prism...
    now thats ,all long and gone i expanded my religion...
    expanded my eyesight gave me tha right type of vision....

    you see i spent alotta time writing ~rhymes in a box...
    all because someone got a lil fiesty,i left him~right in a box...
    i cant be a troubled youth no more~fightin' with cops...
    i saw tha truth,and tha truth gave me tha ~light and it rocks!!!

    I might be a lil rough on tha edge,
    but time spent...
    somewhere isolated,glad that i made it,
    and took tha right step....
    no more pain filled poetry ,no more sayin'
    my minds bent...
    u see tha whole time i kept God close to me,
    and he was showin' me whut life meant....

    I STILL MAY BE A LIL CRAYZY,
    A LIL F**CKED IN THA HEAD...
    BUT LURK GOT,LOVE TO SHED,
    DONT LET THAT LOVE BE DEAD...
    I KNOW THA WORLD SEEMS A LIL CRAZY
    BUT THRU POETRY WE VENT.....
    I WAS WALKIN' THA WRONG ROAD,
    GLAD HE SHOWED ME WHUT LIFE MEANT.....

    tears of fear and sufferin' may race down my face,
    one after tha other,tryin to beat each other in tha race...
    i just look at my daughter and see life thru new eyes...
    no more gettin confused ,i blew thru a few lies....
    i was wrong for doin whut i did to a few guyz...
    at tha time they may have asked for it
    for backstabbin' tha kid....
    but now i see why they did whut they did ,i realized...
    that 'beef' aint worth it,cause you could do some REAL time....
    i keep my faith in tha hands of my baby,boo....
    shorty said she never cared for me,yeah,that may be true.....
    i always will be ,and still am a crazy dude...
    but lets get real,I STAY REAL,so dont play me for a fool....
    i gots ,love to shed,and ya know its all for you's....
    i put my,family first ,i hope this message is callin' you's........
    cause

    I GOT,LOVE TO SHED
    DONT LET THAT LOVE BE DEAD...
    USE TO ,LIVE A LIFE A CRIME
    WHUT WAS GOIN ON IN MY HEAD..??
    I MADE A FEW MISTAKES,
    BUT STILL GOT,LOVE TO SHED.....
    I RID THA HATE,ALMOST LEAD A SINNERS FATE,
    DESTEE,LURK NEVER FORGET......




    thanx alot guys for givin me wonderful feedback on alotta of my drops...
    everything i write is from tha heart..and yall showed me nuthin but love thru
    all tha good and bad times i went thru,givin a lil insight to my life here and there.....i will never forget that.....im going to try to be on here more each day,but life is throwin alotta things my way.....and i must play tha role of tha
    catcher and soak all that up....remember,if yall want copies of my album just holla at me....there free for anyone here....but just yall...so shhhhhh...keep that on tha DL.....

    [email protected]


    i gots love to shed....u know it....



    one love.....


    DCproductions....copywrite2004...
     
  2. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH ,and how come i cant check my private messages..??
    $$RICH$$ ,do u know..??like i like a leave here for a few and yall ban my message priveleges or sumthin..???lol....i dunno...i may be buggin...but i knwo i have some messages from yall and it wont let me check em..if any1 knows why,let me know....i dont want yall to feel like im ignorin yall....


    one....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey brutha naw it's the new time one.....lol
    but really none premium members don't have the
    features like premiun members do tyte drop happy
    to be reading you again man
     
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    Sounds like you're talking about growth, I hear you, welcome back. :)
     
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    WELCOME BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    :grouphug: I am So glad you are back and well my brotha now hurry up and let the pen write...:look:
     
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    Thanks Trin...for bringing back this gem...
    don't know how I missed this the first time around...but
    anyway....

    Lurk...this piece was phenomenal...
    and I will be hittin you up...for a cd...believe :spinstar:

    Love the entire peace but that stanza I quote just
    hit me so hard...wow, thanks for allowing me to see
    the world through your eyes for a moment...

    It was enlightening...Peace
     
  8. LURK

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    THANX ALOT FOR THE FEEDBACK GUYZ...IM HAVIN PROBLEMS WITH MY COMP..AS SOON AS I GET THEM FIXED U KNOW I'LL BE HOLLERIN' AT YA.....
    I REALLY DO APPRECIATE YOU CHECKIN OUT THIS PIECE.....IM IN A HURRY BUT IM ALSO LOOKIN FORWARD TO CHECKIN OUT THA HEAT ALL A YALL BE DROPPPIN TOO...I PEEPED SOME OF MZ BLACK ANGELS AND TRINITI'S STUFF...U GIRLS ARE SOOO TALENTED.....I WISH I KNEW YALL IN PERSON..I THINK WE WOULD GET ALONG WONDERFULLY...CAUSE I CAN RELATE TO YALL SOO MUCH...RICH STILL DOIN HIZ THANG...PLAYA PLAYA...HAHA...HOLLA AT ME BRUH....1
     
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    yo you lit the page with this piece son...
    i'm glad you are back too...
    don't be so long next time mayn
    one love
    khasm
     
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    hi:wave:Lurk
    welcome home
    feel nice feeling your flows
    again...:)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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