Black Poetry : I got you girl

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chaya Chaim, Mar 14, 2016.

  1. Chaya Chaim

    Chaya Chaim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let's make this real tonight
    I gotta few bucks, so we can get a bite
    I missed you so much I gotta hold you tight
    You're lips on mine and your fingers down my back feels so right

    I aint gotta be at work for a while so come on and let me make you mine
    I love your smile, your sensual stares, my word, you're so fine
    Sit on my lap baby, give me your heart and lean on me so hard I could almost go blind
    You got me thinking of making you my wife and breaking my mindset and pouring my soul to because you're worth my time

    I see you giving me the eye and giggle
    I know you love when my strong arms grab you behind because you laugh that it tickles
    Girl be mine, I won't love our love break or trickle
    I got you , I got this and we will make this unbreakable
     
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    this took me down a memory lane of mines
     
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    I feel you brother I freestyled this with my deceased brother and our childhood friend in 2003 to "slow jamz" my brother sang Jamie's part and I did my part at end end our friend freestyled a verse in the beginning
     
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    "You got me thinking of making you my wife and breaking my mindset and pouring my soul to because you're worth my time"

    You got game, Son.
     
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    Chaya Chaim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you brother Shalom:)
     
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    I love that last line the most. So few words convey, your confidence and your desire to include her as part of the strength to hold it together. A strong finish to a cool flow!
     
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