Black Poetry : I Got Turned Out - Turning You Out

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, Dec 12, 2006.

  1. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    vdsvsd
     
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    Hi So'ja
    You know my brother this is a very tight poem
    And it has a lot of exciting points
    And this flow is reflecting to me how the brother
    Is indeed going out the way to make this woman happy
    I do feel the satisfaction of the skills render
    but i'm looking to feel if he is happy 2
    there is no room for attachment

    very tight flow my brother,
    Much love poet
    I'm digging your flow

    Peace & Love
     
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    Often one is certain they possess the skillful ability to turn someone out,
    but sometimes in the end they are either, sadly or happily mistaken
    when they discover it is their nose that is wide open.

    Don't get too caught up and forget about the streets. :wink:

    Nice to see you're flowing again.


    Coco
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man i feel u and been down this road more then once
    more times then one turning one out get's turned out whewwww!
     
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    what a twist this was flo on my brotha!
     
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    Funny how things sometimes take a turn. You think you can just shake those feelings off, but it's more than just a notion. Life is often not what we counted on. Tight write.
     
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    Dang! i really enjoyed this
    this was a twist
    very nice...no lye about dat
    so flow on wit nonstop..my bratha

    blackluv and bp
     
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    Nice write! You hit a homer with it.:playball:
     
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    my brother from another...
    i have been there @ done dat....

    wow.
     
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    True the ship was wrecked before you got there


    and sometimes we are overcome by our attractions


    Well written to the point we understand why songs like this are written


    Peace

    Patrice
     
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