Black Poetry : I got the hots!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nevar, Feb 20, 2006.

  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got the hots for a cat named Blacksoul
    A brotha like that want to make you reach the goal

    What goal you may ask
    Im gonna tell you it aint about what you flash

    Just be true and promise you wont wear a mask
    Just so that you can get this @ss

    He's sweet and gentle like a cool breeze
    Everytime we speak he make me weak in the knees

    So far away but yet feels so near
    The brotha got it going on help a sista erase all her fears

    He makes me feel like no other
    Im so glad to have known this brotha

    So kind so considerate
    Well educated on me nothing about him says illiterate

    He evokes a passion all needs to feel
    When I smile I know its real

    When I get my hands on him
    Hopefully he will let the lights go dim

    So I can tell him how long I've been longing for his touch
    From these past writing I've been needing it so much

    I hope he take me in his arms
    Smother me with his charms

    Lean closer to plant this erotic kiss
    Im thinking [email protected] I cant believe this
    This natural bliss

    This high
    He moving his hands upon my thigh
    I cry

    Because I got the Hotssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    I did a piece for Rich called Your Wordz Rich and now Im moving on to Blacksoul. Im gonna show love to the men who showed me some so get ready men you could be next. Nevar!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I got me eye on a certain snake that oozes out caramel!!!!!!!!!!!!!:love:
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah sis nice work..keep da pen stroke'n
     
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    Wow I am jealous, any man that can make your knees weak just by talking to him I wanna be. Nice work ma.

    Mannie
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to caramelpython

    to caramelphyton thanks for wishing me a Happy Birthday. Someone asked me what did you get for you birthday. I said nothing physically but i got some Recognition. To me that means a whole lot then a gift. It means they either care about cha or love ya so thanks!!!!!!!!!! and oh watch out Phyton you are my next victim of I got the hots Part 2 hahhahahah!!!!!!:love:
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Papi you know I got you. Me and you on a deeper level remember. We dont have to take our clothes off just to have a good time. Yeah Papi that some deep ish. Papi when I say I got cha. I got cha just be looking out for it ok Papi. Cool.:love: :deal: :blush:
     
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    WOW YOU HAVING THE HOTS IS MAKING ME SWEAT. REAL TIGHT POEM NEVAR AS ALWAYS NEVAR. NEVER HAD A POEM WRITTEN FOR ME I APPERICATE IT GREATLY THANK YOU MUCH.
     
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    Oh yeah? Well do what u do best sister just rember I will coil u up and squeeze ya tight when it get's "HOT":deal:
     
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    Nevar! Don't make me come up there... all north east of here and get you with your flirting behind.... LOL... I don't chirp you for two days and you trying to lose that nickel! You know what nickel! LMAO.. nice drop poet.... flow on sis....
     
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    About Blacksoul

    U are not the only one with the hots for him.
    I love this!!!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know what it is. if you got the hots you just have the hots right. so you deserve it.:hearts2: :hearts2: :kiss: :grouphug:
     
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