Black Poetry : I GOT RHYthuM

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  1. emanuel goodman

    emanuel goodman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got rhythum
    I got the beat u see
    I have had it since conception
    it was stored in my memory. I was
    born in sync in tune with my mother my
    grandmother to the earth to the sun and all
    the way to the creator.I feel the creators vibrations
    all the way through me. MY rhythum goes deeper than any response
    to a song . It is online with the creators thoughts and energy all day long My rhythum is love . The greatest gift form the creator keep sending your vibes fam i feel U.
     
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    emanuel:
    Feeln' your RHYthuM...
    Now tell me something did you make the formation
    of the poem like that on purpose. That's very
    creative.

    Much Luv
     
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    That rhythm was -very- nice.

    A little sudden in the ending, but I did dig it immensly.

    Made me smile, thanks.

    ~Ikoro
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicly pose'd indeed
     
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    U do got rhythum and
    I'm constantly rockin side to side to it.
     
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    I feel it you got the rhythm and it and its shaikng everybody up
     
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