Black Poetry : i got a stumach hurt

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i got a stumach hurt from
    the thought of she
    hating me
    i

    i
    be lost in the
    thought of her body so much

    i lose track of the days...

    (what day is it?)

    i be
    tryna grasp her in dreams
    but she be far far away from me
    not unattainable....
    just.far.

    aggravatingly far.
    exacerbatingly.
    far.

    i'd love touching her.

    i'd love it so much...

    i got a stumach hurt from her sweetness.

    it's
    beyond any boundary
    more expansive than any thought
    it's.
    she.

    espee.the.lyrical.myricle
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Damm....to miss the touch of she..don't be csught up in her hatred ;( :) This was a good flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one whom so hate fear da love keep moving forward bruh!
    dis flow was awesome tyte
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read y'all.

    sean.appreciated.
     
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    Sean.appreciated.

    She should appreciate how you be feelin on her imaginary beauty...Sometimes our dreams be so real, we could actually reach out and touch....I'm feeling this...fo real.


    I'm just sayin...
     
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    This is so beautiful! I hope she does'nt stay upset for long because after the stumach hurt comes the runs! (smiles)
    I can feel your longing! uh oh! I feel a stumach hurt comin on!

    Tyte flow!
     
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