Black Haiku : I got a love jones

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  1. asimplepoet

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    I got a love jones
    for only you and no one else
    Wish you only knew

    maybe i'll be brave
    build up the nerve to say
    how much i dig you

    till then i will wait
    secretly admiring you
    enjoying the view
     
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    I like the simplicity and view of this flow.

    If they are aware.
    It will be seen
    No need for words
    To spark a dream

    It is good to be the object of admiration
    Viewed by someone special
    With adoration
    Hesitation and taking a cautious view
    Gives the viewer time to see if it's true.:love:
     
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    that's real

    NOW BUILD UP THE NERVE!

    lol:SuN024:
     
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    I'll give permission.
    You may enter into my
    Innermost Sanctum.

    And I'll welcome you
    With your preferred limbs open
    And bless you to bliss...

    But there is a catch.
    I have to be able to
    Trust you with my being
     
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    I would take the leap
    If I could see tommorrow
    To scared to fall

    Falling hard in love
    Is no fun if you're alone
    So dear meet me there

    You're asking for trust
    I'm looking for staying power
    so what is the deal
     
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    I'll stay if you stay.
    You have to promise never
    Make me mistrust you.
     
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    Beautiful work, from a beautiful poet.

    I think I gotta love jones too.
    :qqb006:
     
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    Hidden secrecy
    my love jones working on me
    time i let her know
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea...A love jones is like that itch you got in tha middle of ya back...

    ...just can't reach it....

    so it drives ya wild!
     
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    U need somebody
    to take care dat itch or what
    cause i know someone
     
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