Black Poetry : I give you me....by $$RICH$$ and MzBlkangel

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$Rich$$

    Romantically slowly I walk
    closer feeling the warm
    Beat of your heart
    I hand u a rose of love
    as we sit under candle light
    To a night u and I alone
    whispering sweet nothings
    and caressing cuddling
    under the open
    fireplace tracing ya beings
    I look deep into those pretty
    angel brown bedroom eyez
    and uncover a new world
    Tonight in our romantic moment
    I give u me............................


    Angel

    A night made for two…
    By the fireplace…
    I cuddle to your body…
    Comfy and content…
    Look deep into your eyez
    I feel your thoughts…
    As you invade mine
    I see another world within
    side of you.
    This moment
    I give you me…


    $$Rich$$

    Our romantic night
    cap by heart in the
    moment that we start
    caressing
    teasing
    sweet gentle kisses
    A place u and i go
    as we dance cross
    da floor
    Holding handz
    embracing smiles
    on a romantic cloud of
    our very own existence
    holding it's shape
    As we romantically
    look eye to eye
    let me hold u and speak
    I give you me…


    Angel

    I listen to you….
    As you mesmerize me.
    Hold my hand and gently speak
    so sweet…. a peace came
    over me made me
    Realize you’re the one…
    Set me on cloud nine…
    Heart skip a beat….
    As you take me I speak softly…
    I give you me…


    $$Rich$$

    As we dance in this maze
    I see the romantic beauty
    Within your eyez
    Hear a soft melody
    Of u and I
    embracing closer
    from my heart I speak
    I give you me…
    U feel me weak
    A night for us alone as
    I kiss u to sleep sweet
    angel face of mine


    Angel
    Now my heartbeats smooth
    As I lay in your arms
    The melody of you and I
    Still playing as I speak
    I give you me….
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz in the moment of tyme shinning like two starz
    in the mist of night the sparkle is the pen !
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankz...i like when his pen vibes with mine...
    and we do our thang....:angel1:
     
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    yall are the collab blazer
    nice vibes
    wonderful
    loving this
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz sistah bluewaterrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!
    pen n' pen
    hand n' hand
    soul 2 soul
    unfolding the vibes within
     
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    Head turning post from the 2 of you!

    This is a smooth post Im feeling the 2 of you in this one.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u and welcome within happy u enjoyed the flow
     
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    thankz fo da love...and welcome to da fam...
     
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    rewind a play.....lookin within
    as the book unfolds......
     
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    guys this is beautifull .. :flirt:


    i think that some of the calabo,s i have seen here at desee should be putted on valintine cards...

    cause these are beautifull pieces of art..



    i have never don a callabo.....
    dont know how to do it?

    for example if someone writes a piece .....
    i can not respond that quick in a nice poetry way.....i have to take it home and make it with a dictionary book beside cause i have to trans late it..


    but its always nice to read it...
    from other poets asspecialy when you are in a love mood...
    they just take you away for a minut..



    Keep colaboing...



    Cause love is good.....




    LoveLibertylady:heart:
     
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