Black Poetry : I Gave Her Flowers

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Reason, Nov 6, 2001.

  1. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bravo Poet!!!
     
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    got my tooth aching...this was very sweet. enjoyed this.

    zhay
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    TRUE PLAYA

    STATUS

    AND DID YOU GET A CHANCE TO GIVE HER SOMETHING ELSE???

    69 MORE REASONS WHY

    YOU THE MAN

    >dssny<


    MUCH RESPECT AS ALWAYS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Reason man !!

    beauty within ya heart
    and u gave her flowers
    man this was too tyght!!

    it's on my top flight list...:toast:
     
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    this put me in the reminds of an old

    song by the 5th Dimension...."Misty Roses"

    "you look to me like misty roses, too soft to touch, but much too lovely to leave alone".....

    this is absolutely gorgeous, Reason.

    Thank you

    a
     
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    Okay.. I'm lost...

    No lie... i didn't get it.. or shall i say.. i'm not interpreting this the way everyone else did.. cause i could've sworn you called her ugly. I'm not blind but to if i was a blind person that would be my first question... How do i look? And if you just gave me some flowers and walked a way.. i would take that as you being a gentleman and not wanting to hurt my feelings... okay..I'm starting to babble.. but i really didn't get it... :confused:
     
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    This was simply beautiful...

    and so tenderly sad at the same time....

    will you write part two..and tell me the answer you gave to the question...

    this covers so many emotions....

    K
     
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    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaneak & Cindy....

    Perhaps you should re-read this piece.....

    The focus should be on what the flowers represent...not the walking away...

    The flowers speak his answer

    I hope this helps

    Blk Kween
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh okay!!!

    Gotcha!!! I understand now...
    Thanks!! Blk Kween

    Reason: sorry bout the misinterpretation... that was sweet.. but i am hoping for a partII!!!
    :x:
     
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