Black Poetry : I FOUND U THERE

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  1. $$RICH$$

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    Stalling through da technical spinner of multi-colors

    by default and reasons i stumble upon ya lace
    I devor you , my heart lone for you inside ya eyez
    i see not da dismay but the beauty of ya pose

    We have cross paths many times yet you not see me
    for my voice is the carrier of love and devotion
    i promote my secrecy and lavish my soul whereas
    and still you turn away like da days gone by us

    I found you there awaiting arms , i so reach out
    my hand unto thee only to embrace thou image
    for in my mind under close scope i see you there
    i see da coloris of ya nubian flair and da sparkle

    Why not you loveth me , for i am thy KING
    of everlasting and unbound unconditionally
    I've wedd my thoughts of you and envision us
    i've even compromise my confession at your feet
    still you walketh away like da night under da starz

    For now my cherry moons cry in da ripple burnning orange
    clashing wit every beat of my heart dat calls out to you
    do you not hear me ,I may have made this dangerous mistake
    but forgive me beloveth and return upon my throne
    for happiness awaits me only by your hand

    I found you there , be not bashful nor shame
    for my nudity is not my nakedness but my coming
    in da rare yet birth rights as i was given at first light
    come ye' behold me and not forsaken me
    i am upon thee closer then you know, i see u there.

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    Watching every move made
    i see you there yet awaiting
    is it of thou love one lone
    or am i just inside a myth
    I see u there !
     
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    To see that one, so much passion fashioned in these lines. Beautiful write.
     
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    Thank u sister Watz for the warm visit
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!




    $$RICH$$,

    Oh so real! But hear is what got me:

    I found you there , be not bashful nor shame
    for my nudity is not my nakedness but my coming
    in da rare yet birth rights as i was given at first light
    come ye' behold me and not forsaken me
    i am upon thee closer then you know, i see u there.


     
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    Thankz brother for feeling the depth of me seeing her there, happy you enjoyed
    do visit me again .
     
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    My this was so passionate...I could feel your pain here....very lovely write.

    My cherry moons cry in da ripple burning orange....wow, what a creative line!
     
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    when the heart speaks it tell the truth and words clash like never before to
    express self deeply happy u was able to feel my inner beings as they cry out
    unto a hopeful fate that i wish for and lay ahead ......time will soon tell my
    long awaiting story of a book that has yet to end .

    Sweet apple*pie ....i'm most humble for your words of heart thank u
     
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    For only there , I soth my oats in da name of thee
    whereas my beloveth so am I
    and yes I found you there as thou rare jewel !
     
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    I am feeling the depth of you and this poem wonderful write
     
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