Black Poetry : I Found Out

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Sep 28, 2003.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love to the fam
    Took me in like your own


    I found Out


    Dreams of you sparkle
    I’m so blind
    Watches swatch in the dark
    Oh the times

    Spending so much on dimes
    When a nickel was for me
    A quarter horse racing
    When a pup adored me

    So much time dwelling in the past
    Finding myself was my destiny
    To find the best of her
    Was to unveil the best of me

    I find out relations are untrue
    It’s the feeling you make, now what you do
    To create in a mate, found to be fake
    I made many mistakes

    Trying to grind to find the last dime
    Hours turned to years, waterfalls of tears
    Blowing smoke in the wind
    Hoping the scent would catch my peers
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow enjoy the read
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very smooth ya pen sure did find out
     
  4. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautiful...and honest...i loved it.
     
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    wow this was profound yesssssss so true:sand:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow spokesman, this is so deep in its simplicity. love it.
     
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