Black Poetry : I found (My groove)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Feb 6, 2004.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I found My groove in a pen
    and I danced within the paper

    I steped in the name of love
    between the lines of this caper

    I started in Arial
    then I moved to Courier New

    I flowed with this groove
    like a waring Sue.

    I kept my date
    with Ms papermate

    As I wrote in this flow
    then i flicked my Bic when she was moving 2 slow.

    Now Ms papermate flicked my Bic with her Flexgrip
    I guess she made sure things wouldent slip.

    Now I usually write in Composition
    but she was college ruled

    So I grabed my #2
    and took her to school

    I stroked her all inbetween the lines
    of her beautiful pages

    I wrote in Century Gothic
    without abuseing erasers

    See I found my groove in a pen
    and I danced within the paper

    I found My groove called poetry
    so I will write again later.

    :grouphug:

    caramelpython
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dancing wit the pen & pad
    poetry in motion flow on
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow....
     
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    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH I LIKE IT!

    This was so great, I love the syncopation in your verse style, the word play and innuendo's were perfectly placed I even chuckled as I see some of you in me...(I am known to bust out with a pen and paper at Da Club)LOL!
    I truly enjoyed this piece! :geek: :geek: Now it's me and the PC...but for necessity nothing but Gel ink for me!

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so creative...you gave that pen a workout for sure...wow.
     
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    Don't disturb this groove...

    Grab that lady by her slim body & glide with her over the paper dancefloor.

    And if U don't have paper, a napkin works just fine.

    I liked this one completely.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm relating...
    Poet to Poet...
    enjoying the smooth
    verbosity of your groove
    so don't stop... :wink:
     
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    reggaediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jah poet,
    this was very nice enjoyed reading it much so. better than some that when you start they make you want to go to another site keep on keepin on.
    BLESSINGS INTINUALLY TO U
    JAH DIVA :read:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooo yeah, mad lovin the creativity in this, cp, not to mention the hyped up flow. woo!
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: $$RICH$$ imhappy to be able to get back into the groove again 4 a min.

    mzblkangel... I'm glad you enjoyed it.

    msluciousb..... :geek: I am feeling u LOL :thanks:

    watzinaname.. thanks alot sister

    PositiveMindset ....... :deal: hey if necessary bathroom tissue works 2..LOL

    angelicsage .......:wink: not going to stop now.... :thanks:

    reggaediva .... your words honor me lady..... ;)

    gempis..... :thanks: I'm glad u enjoyed now flow on my friend! ;)
     
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