Black Poetry : I form this in the body of a question

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  1. LadyBelle

    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I form this in the body of a question,
    Often you have left my mind questioning
    Why would you touch me
    And speak to my desire
    To be held on high regards
    Yet you blow out my fire
    If not to love me
    Why would you eat from my fruit
    After newness is gone
    Why must evil
    I believe you try to execute the Jesus in me
    And like a fool I must admit
    What your doing to me I don’t want you to quit
    So I pose this to you in the form of a question
    Tell me, what the hell am I suppose to do?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deeply asked a question yet known
    when one step inside so strong
    then lay back off da harvest
    which question da reason only
    then da answer lay within self
    redefind da mirror, it is there.

    This piece was mind blowin by a question, many just to answer
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    people have been asking this question for years
    the problem is most of the time they arent ready for the answer
    Great write poet
     
  4. LadyBelle

    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, It is a question I still seek to define and reanswer....I appreciate your response. Thank you again
     
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    surely the answer is there just ahead of you
    but i'll tell u the answer before we all through
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    well

    if loving you is wrong, he don't wanna be right

    human comfort is a funny thing
    we want it but the unknown kinda keeps us stuck

    great question poet

    what are you going to do?
     
  7. LadyBelle

    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you So'ja,
    Like you said at times we get comfortable with the routine of staying in a relationship (even if it is no good for us). We are afraid of letting go becuase we fear facing loniness. Who wants to be an empty shell right?
     
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    LadyBelle"
    I feel you on this.
    Exactly...."what am I suppose to do"
    Perfectly Expressed.


    Much Luv
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello LadyBelle...

    :wave:
    Sometimes certain questions remain unanswered until we've had enough.

    The pondering of many questions in our lives. I feel you!


    MaddSistahlyLoveAlways!
    Coco:heart:
     
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