Black Poetry : I Flow Like A River

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by JNubian, Oct 10, 2001.

  1. JNubian

    JNubian Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I flow like a river
    Pulled by the Moon
    You stretch and come with me
    Our bodies in tune

    I open as a flower
    Kissed by the Sun
    You open there with me
    Together we're one

    I'm rising
    You're falling
    I ebb
    Then you flow

    But we get there
    Together
    Whereever we go

    I'm Knowledge
    You're Power
    We're Wisdom complete

    I'm Yin
    To your Yang
    We're a Force
    We're a Team

    And I flow
    Like a River
    Pulled
    By the Moon
    You rise
    And come
    With me
    Together
    In tune

    JNubian
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooh yeah sista Poet!

    I'm totally feeling this flow!

    thank you

    a
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beauty in the comparison of one to the other..

    opposites, yet pulling towards each other, fitting together to make a oneness...

    K
     
  4. JNubian

    JNubian Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Asante' Sana Fellow Poets:

    I'm but a Neophyte having entered the realm of the accomplished.
    So glad you're both feelin' my lines!
    JNubian
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well said NUBIAN

    the motion of dis flow rockin' my thoughts nicely
    :)
     
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