Black Poetry : I Find Myself Looking For ... You

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I find myself looking for you. Longing for your intimacy
    I find myself looking for you. Desiring to stare into your eyes.
    I find myself looking for you. Tasting your sweetness so sweetly.
    I find myself looking for you. Wanting to be in your midst.

    As I look for you my sense run wild.
    Feeling you tenderly touch my soul with soft-spoken words.
    Taking me on loving trips into your loving world.
    Teaching me, that letting go is letting you hold me.
    Help me to understand the love you’ve give me.

    From the minute you leave my door, i feel an emptiness inside.
    For you have filled a void where pain and loss abide.
    You have given me sweet life again, to sing of joy unknown.
    You’ve made my heart the dwelling place of our eternal love.

    I find myself looking for you. Longing for your intimacy
    I find myself looking for you. Desiring to stare into your eyes.
    I find myself looking for you. Tasting your sweetness so sweetly.
    Then I find myself with you. Lying here in your arms.
     
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    Haaaaaaaaaaaaay KLabarron :wave:

    This is beautiful ... and even more beautiful to me ... cause i know you.

    Great Work!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh lawd...this is so sweet. i love this.
     
  4. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks much Des!!!!!

    LiLi - thanks my sista!

    Keep the flow!!!
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo keef mo',

    how could it be that you can see so deep into emotion...so deep into the unsaid but definite consensus between the He and She as understood by the We's, if that mad any sense...flow on poet flow on
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes this is beautifull,im feeling this one here..

    those who seek will find...



    amen..
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kl

    definately a beautiful peace. love the way you flowed this.




    one
     
  8. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    brotherman - pain, longing for love, and rejection brought the depth of vision.

    Thanks Zorb!
     
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