Black Poetry : I Find It Hard To Say

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Nov 7, 2002.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I find it hard to say
    All the things that last night has inspired
    I find it hard to wrap my mind around
    The possibility of us
    I find it hard to see
    Forever
    History is always nipping at my heel
    Destined to be repeated
    Promises broken
    Lies spoken
    Hearts broken
    Tears shed
    Virgins bed
    Fear resides beside the hope I hold close
    Intinmidated by your confidence
    Intimidated by your appeal
    Intimidated by your voice
    Intimidated by the way you make me feel
    I find it hard to grasp the fact
    That you want me
    Desire me
    May one day even love me
    I find it hard to say the words I dare not think out loud
    I find
    It hard
    To say
    “yes”

    Natasha
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    you did it again

    you touch the very depth of your thoughts
    each time

    nice work!

    pd

    :)
     
  3. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is nice work, and again can relate to the feelings. But taken one day at a time the possibilites are endless.
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i read this the other day but i guess i didnt respond to it

    great work
     
  6. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love !

    sometimes all these emotions crowd inand can overwhelm the oul ........ so I write .......alone ...and then I post it , and I realize that these emotins don't belong to just me ...Its a comforting feeling
     
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