Quiet Poetry Lounge : I felt your "MENTAL" touch today

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by queentswana, Nov 30, 2006.

  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A vase full of beautiful roses, each one has a story to tell,​

    of all the unknown reasons, of how my spirit fell.
    So many different aroma's , each stood out on it's own,
    they traveled thousands of miles and more, to bloom in my heart and my home.

    Who sent this treasure, from across the world?
    for in the center of all this beauty..was a tiny Pearl.
    That pearl and I had a special connection,
    into it, I poured out all my affection.

    I mentioned to the pearl all the pain in my heart,
    since the day that my whole world fell apart.
    Of how my sun dropped from the sky...
    I wondered why it had to fly

    ~what a powerful pearl~

    It ordered the "Blue" to return to my skies,
    the "wind" to sail under my wings...
    it suddenly healed my aching heart,
    and the rest of those tidious things.

    See, it knew those roses was coming my way,
    and it knew there was a lot I had to say.
    It knew I needed them to hold me tight,
    and whatever was wrong, they'd make it right.

    They watched every tear that ever fell from my eyes..
    they listened at night, and heard all my cries.
    Yes, it hid in those roses, that traveled all of those miles...
    just to see my radiant, beautiful smile.

    ~And last but not least, they wanted me to know...
    that they are with me wherever I go~
     

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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so beautiful this was. its seems like you have a wonderful husband! and a good at that. very hard to find. May God continue to be the rock in your lyfe Queen!
     
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    Awww!

    I can feel your heart melting in this
    piece.

    I feel it so strong, that my own heart
    has melted.

    What a lovely suprise to
    receive, and a beautiful
    expression of your humbleness.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something of beauty can bring out such emotion in us. You probably saw a world within those flowers, a whole spectrum of feelings. The wonder of nature can certainly inspire a poet's pen. This flow was both lovely, and thought provoking queent, made me think of how and why are muses are what they are. :)
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL.....

    Queen:
    My...*sigh* your words are deeply felt.
    Those roses told a beautiful story. Its amazing
    what one can see and feel in flowers. This piece
    really touched me. We should all know love like
    you and brother Keita. Very lovely write my sista.


    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    delightfully........... u always creat master pieces
     
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