Quiet Poetry Lounge : I Fell

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  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I fell when you walked passed me
    LOoked my way and started to speak to me
    I fell when you asked me to be yours
    I fell several times for the thigns you said
    I fell for the games you played
    In all the experiences I've had yours changed me the most
    I'm no longer just a good girl
    I fell because you changed my whole world
    I'm grateful to you for showing me life
    Thanks to you falling never felt so good
    I fell In love with you the first time I met you
    And since that day you've managed to catch me every time
    :ilu:






    All things in this life are preciuos but none more precious than the love you find when you let go of the small insignificant things. :thinking:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If "falling" in love can make you feel this good, wait until you start "growing" into it, that's heaven.
    I like this piece poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we all fall and when love takes ova it's divine
    tyte joint here ..........................................

    welcome to destee.com quiet flowz
    welcome to the family of love & peace
    welcome from above happy u here to share .
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I echo everyones sentiments welcome welcome welcome
    Thanx for sharing.
     
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    To fall in love and have someone there to catch you, is a marvelous thing, who knows where two will go from there? You flow so genuinely poet. Welcome.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you everyone fro your support of ayoung seventeen year old poet. You can't know what it means to me to have someone appreciate my poetry.
     
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    most welcome dear sista Queen continue to bring it ....
     
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    re:Fell

    Beautiful Poem.
     
  9. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for the simple but sweet reply I aim to find all the many beauties that poetry can offer.
     
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    This was so romantic. A piece that everyone in a relationship or even friendship should read. It definitely moved me. Aww man...where the phone at?... Let me call my sweetie!

    ~*~Reesecup~*~
     
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