Quiet Poetry Lounge : I fell in love with the frienship

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by asimplepoet, May 9, 2008.

  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How did you get in here
    You climbed in unaware
    In between the marathon calls
    In the midst of our shared pitfalls
    During our celebrations of victory
    On some meaningful page of my story
    You came in and just plain stole the show
    Making me appreciate all that came before
    Every heartache, sleepless night and midnight cry
    Every back-bite, betrayal, and situation gone awry
    For it was a setup, to one day cross paths with you
    And the end justifies all the things I had to go through
    For you my friend are worth your weight in pure gold
    When God made you He definitely broke the mold
    For what kind of friend sticks closer than a brother
    And loves you unconditonally like your mother
    I can only count true friends like that on one hand
    So to you my friend I say thank you while I can
     
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    wow!!! not many can love thy friend because they are so rare but when one comes
    alone we are thankful...this was beautiful
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A great and a Fullfilling Bond With a Friend, That is Beauty. And one to Last..Very Nice poem Sis. Beautiful, Flow On
     
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    To have a friend that loves you unconditionally, through thick and thin, now that's a friend. Your love for this friend comes alive through your words poetess.
     
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    Excellent flow poet. I can relate to such a chance encounter. I like how you referred to your experiences before this friend as a "setup". Wow! Excellent parley
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Friendship is pure and you know that's a good point because the old folks always sing you have a friend in Jesus. Out of all the things they call him a friend and maybe it comes down to all the characteristics you've displayed is why we call Jesus our Friend! Maybe this is why all friends are special too!
     
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    HI There
    This is a great poem.
    Friendship is special because it is a choice
    when you become a friend, A true friend.
    And to have a deep friendship that carries through
    the happy and the sad. The bitter and the sweet.
    Is a treat. Very deep. I enjoyed the read
    and the awakening about the ones who I feel are my friends

    Peace and much love

     
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