Black Poetry : I feel....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Nov 7, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my favorite movie is the five heart beats
    i love the music...so i wrote this with it in mind...
    hope yall like...:angel1:


    I feel like I can walk
    Around heaven all day
    Do you hear me…?
    I feel like I can walk
    around heaven all day..

    See one day
    That bright shiny morning
    I be at home…
    No more worry
    No more cryin..
    See my love have took be
    Afar…
    And what I hold inside…
    Is a boastful love….

    See one day…
    My mother will be meetin me at dat
    Pearly gate…
    Angelz will sing
    As I cry…
    For I be home…
    What I got inside…
    Is a merciful love….

    See one day…
    I be home…
    Sweet valleys the chariets will
    Play…the grass greener and
    The flowers bloom..all year around…
    What I got inside me….
    Is a dyin love to love….

    See one day…
    I be home..
    Right where I belong..
    For my bones wont ache..
    Wont need to worry
    No cryin
    No sufferin
    For I be at home….
    This is what I got inside of me..
    My foundation
    Begins with him

    I feel like I can walk
    Around heaven all day
    Do you hear me…?
    I feel like I can walk around heaven all day..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so it's told to be a beautiful
    place to walk around
    this piece put me in mind of another
    call soon and very soon !
    nice quest
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear ya, sweetie, and I sure nuff know what ya mean. I wish for home sometimes too....this is a great flow.
     
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    This piece is beautiful beyond words.

    Very nice.
     
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    Yes indeed sistah......one day all of us will be at home...tha tyme is not percise yet....but we'll get there....some how....some way......oh yes.....I'm lovin this gurl....keep em' comin'......
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam fo da read...
    glad you like..
    much love :grouphug:
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "... my office hours are from..." :lol:- BIg Red...

    queen this is a nice peace....
    jh.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo da read fam..
    love yall :grouphug:
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :grouphug: I feel like i want to say...That i want to give you a Biiiiiiiiiiig huge
    for bringin me beautifull visions just what i needed to day.....Sweet :heart: angel.....this is a beautifull piece.......


    and Psssst..................... is that you Up in the corner by youre poems....?
    it must be you.......

    at least until now you always have....
    lady always supportive to my poems...:blush:



    Love L
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for da read..
    you placed a bigggggg ole smile on my face ...thank you
    i glad you like the poem here...i love reading you..
    just dont stop written..i am always there to read and support you my dear sister
    much much love :grouphug: :angel1:
     
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