Black Poetry : I Feel

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Earl, Jul 15, 2003.

  1. Earl

    Earl Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel as though I loved you in another life.
    I seem to remember that you never gave me any strife.
    You took great care of me and fed me all my days.
    You always made love to me in the best of ways.
    When our kids grew up and finally moved their grown butts out.
    We held a private party as the world rotated about.
    We shared everything we had and saved to get much more.
    Today I seek the kind of love that we had before.
    I have looked both near and far.
    Shopping at many flea markets and bazaars.
    I can`t find anyone quite like you.
    Life is breakfast and I need my Honey dew.
    What I say is true and for real.
    So, listen Baby, cuz,I`m telling you exactly how I feel.

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  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nicely written....:D
     
  3. PurpleMoons

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    Awwwww! this is so sweet! I hope I have the same experience when my kids move out the house. I'll be looking forward to this
     
  4. LyricalOasis

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    Aww.. this is mad cute keep flowin'.
     
  5. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is sweet. I haven't met you yet, so... :wave:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to the open flow poetically
    dis was tyte
     
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