Black Poetry : I Feel You...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Oct 8, 2013.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    God is Love
    and well spoken

    Hearts don't beat
    to be broken

    Fire burns
    without smoking ~

    Laughter heals
    despite joking

    Men alive...
    ain't mere tokens

    Dreams appear
    to bring focus

    Peace is found
    without coping

    Poems are felt
    without groping


    Darryl Abdu Omari :krazee:
    aka 1poetsought ~ by design
     
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    I feel this poem...tight and concise and on point with the flow and rhymes...yet these quoted are my favorite lines...
     
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    Dearest Brother Poet 1poetsought,

    Marvelous! Rhythmic and playful lines. Wonderful passages. You know I loved reading this.

    (smile)
     
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    Thank you.

    Your words are precious
     
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    "Men alive...
    ain't mere tokens".

    1poet, look at you,
    doing what great poets do.
    When back and tightened up that rhythm.
    Musically flows like water now
    & the beat in my ear
    is pure butter.

    <giggling>
     
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    :dblock: I Feel You, too.
    :shark:
     
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    HODEE going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Very Nice Flow 1poetsought
    Isn't having God, a Heart, Dreams and Peace something awesome?
    Because​
     
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    I couldn't agree more, brother HODEE

    thank you for the riff.
     
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