Black Poetry : I feel the grownd swell!!!!!!!!!

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  1. lilpea

    lilpea Moderator STAFF

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    I feel the ground swell...many are roaming..searching one for another...
    Daughters for their fathers...Sons for their mothers.....
    But what time is at hand..all are puzzled is it doom is it the end?
    Birds flying in any direction with no destination..not remembering where they have been.
    Cats and dogs running in circles with eyes stilled with fear.
    Insects swarming....the air gets cold then immediately starts warming.
    I feel the ground swell

    Trees grow limp than freeze ..day is night and night is day without a breeze .
    Fish gather then die all the waves seem to turn to glass right before your eyes..
    Horses run rapped leaving their colts...all barreling animals come out because of the all the smoke...
    Is it spring, summer, winter or fall...does it matter? just need to find safety thats all.
    What was mountains are now just valleys
    I feel the ground swell...

    What could cause such a thing to happen as the ground to swell?

    A GIANT JELLY FIELD DONUT!!!!

    GOT CHA!!!!!!!!

    Lilpea :1on1:
     
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    A giant Jelly filled donut can make birds fly in every which way direction, plus make the ground swell? What did I miss:qqb004:
     
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    The point is that your deepest fears are just that....Fears!!!!! :SuN024:

    Lilpea :1on1:
     
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    giggles

    hey..thats not fair! I really thought this was supposed to be a deep piece, LOL.

    I mean...I was really starting to think, "Hey, cats and dogs runnin' in circles, and birds flying crazy.....is Jesus back in town or sumthin?? LOL"


    a jelly donought
    ( I cant even spell donought )

    cute!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u too it there and let it go...this was awesome how u got me !
     
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    it's been awhile...

    lilpea. maybe i need to renew my acquaintanceship with the jelly filled.

    keep doing whatcha do.
     
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    hahahahhh just do it without fear bro...but then again u might have to....to many of those donuts is not good for you bro....

    Lilpea :1on1:
     
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    I knew I was in for a treat if Bro Lilpea was blessing us with a scribe from his poetic pen and I was not wrong. I love the twist of this and how you had me all hyped to see that there is nothing behind the hype but needless fear
     
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    You got me:

    I was thinking it was volcano erupting or a meteor that just hit.

    By the way: I'm scared of Jelly filled Doughnuts.
     
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    All bets are off

    Yeah lilpea, the natural order of things have gone haywire.

    Enjoyed this one. :happens:
     
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