Black Poetry : I FEEL SO

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  1. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for reading while it was posted
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da feeling u feel
    from within so real
    as i come from above
    in da grace of love
    unconditionally sweet
    to caress and meet
    compassionately
    where one can have and hold
    share the deepest of secrecy
    as the potion of mines
    will relax and rewind time
    to a sensual devine shine
    where hearts can rise
    from da depth of surprise
    under my glist dat mesmerize
    every emotion of notion
    take the first jet smokin
    upward unto thy domain.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hott Joint Sweetee!!!!
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i accept your invitation
    to join in this love nation
    of two could be so true
    falling in love with you
    i tremble from your touch
    oh i want you so much
    i feel...i feel...oh so very complete
    from my head to my feet
    so shine on me with your soulful grace
    and put your love juice all over my face
    and you will continue to make my heart race
    and come by my side and take your rightful place


    sweettee29 love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Are u really ready
    to feel so good n' plenty
    and the callin of ya kitty
    to feel the love a new
    and the thing i can do
    can u handle the bliss
    and the mix of my twist
    that will mesmerize
    leave ya body hypnotize
    from da heated surprise
    that will make u wet
    break out in sensual sweat
    it feel so !
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I AM BROKEN
    I WILL BE YOUR GOLDEN TOKEN
    YOU CAN DO WITH ME AS YOU PLEASE
    YOU HAVE BROUGHT ME TO MY KNEES
    AND I HAVE OFFERED YOU THE KEYS
    TO MY HEART WHICH MAKES ONE
    ALWAYS SEEM TO COME UNDONE
    I AM TRAPPED A SLAVE OF YOUR EMOTION
    AND I SHOWER ON YOU MY DEEPEST DEVOTION
    MY LIPS WILL HAVE YOU SAYING [email protected]
    AND I WILL EAT YOU UP AND MAKE YOU SAY OH YES MAAM


    SWEETTEE29 LOVE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Felling so ummm u know
    is the bliss deep we go
    to a rapture of glist
    to some freaky extremeness
    what i give will make u scream
    have ya mind in a silent dream
    from this feel of steam
    because it feel so good
    like i knew it would .................
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YOU KNEW I WOULD
    AND I HAVE UNDERSTOOD
    GOT MY BODY ON THE RUN
    MAKING ME SLOWLY COME UNDONE
    CAN I HAVE YOUR BIG PIPE
    I KNOW YOUR BODIES RIPE
    YOUR FLO TASTE LIKE CHERRY NECTAR
    I WANT TO BE YOUR LOVE TESTER
    SO FILL ME UP TO THE BRIM OF MY BODY
    I'LL DRINK YOUR CREAM AND THEN DRINK A HOT TODDEE


    SWEETTEE29 LOVE
     
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    (i'm looking for ma eyeballs, they seemed to have popped out again and rolled on the floor) Oh!, dere they are, Now I can see again! ha ha ha ha.... This was a delightful read and very poetic. I liked the part where you said...LABEL ME YOUR LADY

    MAKE ME FEEL INSANE

    GIVE ME YOUR BABY

    I AM DROWNING IN


    that was coo... brings back memories ha ha ha, now I will so neatly tuck them back away.. thanks mam... flow now... D.S.
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Desert Storm i am glad i could oblige you today

    sweettee29 much much love
     
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