Black Poetry : I Feel It In My Soul

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  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We felt something very special
    And it hit us so very fast
    And, it became everything we wanted
    All for which we could ask
    It became so beautiful, so elegant
    It displayed such style, such class
    It became a desire to see our futures
    And get us beyond our pasts
    It became our peace, our serenity
    It became our calm and our rash
    It added strength; it added patients
    Each time we felt harassed
    It made us know, we are going to grow
    All we've known we will surpass
    It became a passion; it became a love
    And one I was ready to hold on to, at last

    It's become what I respect and trust in
    And it's made me believe
    For so many pleasantly remarkable things
    Continue to come to me
    It's in what I touch and feel
    It's in what I inhale and breathe
    Through worries, distress, and struggles
    Or even any drops of blood I may bleed
    I know it's all mine to indulge in
    And I recognize it is all need
    Thus, I can sense it is a blessing
    And it is destine to succeed
    It's in all I envision for our future
    In everything I currently can see
    Making life easier to go through
    Making this world a nicer place to be


    This one's for my wife Ali, the day I asked for her hand
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello arthur:
    That was so very BEAUTIFUL!!!!
    What a lucky women.
    I really enjoyed this read.


    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesome and so devine
    welcome back arthur1210 nice to feel ya pen again
    u expressed it so well from da heart
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, she must have been elated to hear this. Very sweet and endearing. Welcome back poet.
     
  5. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love... this peice holds great sentiment for me
    This was written for my wife when i fell for her

    Unfortunetly, she is still missing... it's been nearly a year now and the Local Police still have no solid clues
     
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    .. what?

    Brother, I am -sorry- to hear that.

    The piece moved me, it was heavy on my very soul, and I smiled for you and your wife. Then this sad piece of news.

    What a sour, bitter piece of information to know that she is missing.

    I know you are strong, and will wait for- and love her till she returns.

    Stay blessed brother Arthur, my thoughts go out to you.

    One.

    ~Ikoro
     
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    Oh my, Brother Arthur... I had to log back in; just thought I'd comment.. well, there's not one phrase I can think of to describe the emotion this piece evoked. My :heart: goes out to you and yours. May destiny ultimately unite the two of you. What a tear-jerker:crying:

    :sand:

    :picture:

    Peace

     
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    Beautiful heart song, indeed!:crying:

    Sadden to hear she's missing.
    Words can't express the love I
    want to send your way.

    (holdin your hand)
     
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