Black Poetry : I Feel It In My Soul

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  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We felt something very special,
    And it hit us so very fast.
    And, it became everything we wanted
    All for which we could ask.

    It became so beautiful, so elegant
    It displayed such style, such class.
    It became a desire to see our futures,
    And get us beyond our pasts.

    It became our peace, our serenity
    It became our calm and our rash.
    It added strength; it added patients
    Each time we felt harassed.

    It made us know, we are going to grow,
    All we've known we will surpass.
    It became a passion; it became a love
    And, one I was ready to hold on to, at last.

    It became what I respect and trust in,
    And it’s made me believe.
    For, so many pleasantly remarkable things
    Continue to come to me.

    It’s in what I touch and feel
    It’s in what I inhale and breathe.
    Through worries, distress, and struggles
    Or even any drops of blood I may bleed.

    I know it’s all mine to indulge in
    And I recognize it is all need
    And I can sense it is a blessing,
    And it is destine to succeed

    It’s in all I envision for our future
    And in everything I currently can see
    Making life easier to go through
    Making this world a nicer place to be
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it only get sweeter tyte drop
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes it do get sweeter with time and love...this has flare and I enjoyed reading it..looking for more.
     
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    wow... nice! i kinda want to call my man at work now... i luved this piece.
    peacebeme-MsDy
     
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    Nice drop!!
     
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    Sounds like your soul found something special, hold on to that sweet find, nice flow.
     
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    this is a wonderful vison..liking how you flow this vision as well
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    i love this
    wonderful flow
    Peace
    Angel
     
  9. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the luv, everyone ... This was written at the begining of a beautiful thing
     
  10. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    supa sweet
    an well spoken (written)
    tyte
    much props
    respek

    one love,
    /antar
     
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