Black Poetry : i feel bad///for not feeling bad

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  1. Pi5Fs

    Pi5Fs Member MEMBER

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    its funny how memories work

    when your missing somebody so much
    prayin for one more vanilla dutch one more touch
    prayin for just one more ***, ...i mean making love of course....
    you forget that memories of when it wasn't so

    marvelous; commendable

    see those memories are hard to touch
    baby, this letter i'm writing is unsendable

    see, your weren't that dependable

    i remember those nights that were miserable,
    brokenhearted, pained and pathetic
    remembering the chemistry that was magnetic
    but KNOWING that the reaction was synthetic

    i remember the slow days and lonely nights
    where i juss wanted to go, but still wanted you to show
    that maybe you'd know, things would be alright.

    the clocked ticked past 4am and i'd finally realize
    i'd be sleeping alone.
    in your home.
    with my feelings with you in a cyclone
    time dont, but time tries, to erase those memories
    when you miss somebody as much as me.

    last night was the best night of my life
    while you were sitting in jail dreaming of me as your wife
    i was getting it in, and planning what i'd put on the breakfast table
    he gave me a shock like car cables, that made me realize i'm unstable
    and just not able............

    to do this.

    im 18 mayne, just let me free
    you almost a decade older then me
    i know now, it doesn't get colder then me

    i'm not saying i don't love you, your number one
    but when you go from fukin all day everyday
    I MEAN EVERYDAY
    to none.........?
    it worked at first, i was practically a nun
    but outta nowhere i let your love go and it begun
    before i know it, we made a homerun and now were done

    i aint gon stunt, bey, that **** was fun
    i'm young, and dumb
    and maybe i'm just not ready
    not steady, enough to hold us down
    on my own, tho on my own in tha zone your all around
    until i get up with #2's sexy *** from tha next town

    i feel so bad........................ for not feeling bad
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word.....nothing like da conscious kickin in .
     
  3. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one was like a rollercoaster!!!!!
    Emotions are weird...maybe even fickle, but they are vital to our existence!
    I like the way you reported every detail...every twist and emotional turn, and then at a last ditch effort for feeling something....apathy by way of guilt!

    Very good piece.
    Feeling this

    Peace and love
    twision
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So many shades of grey in life, sometimes the way we end up feeling, isn't how we imagined we would feel at all. I really liked the way this was posed.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Greetings

    Hi Pi5Fs Greetings
    Their is no reason for feeling bad about not feeling bad
    Your drop speaks of a learning journey, while you are
    still searching..much love..flow on :rolling:

    Peace & Love
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    handle yours

    sounds like you're holdin' it down

    you flipped this here

    peace poet

    i love the irony in your title too.
     
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