Black Poetry : I F.E.A.R N.O.T

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, May 4, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You think fear
    sleeps next to me
    sleeps with me
    that my "blak"shuns
    are precluded by
    notions of fear that
    freezes me
    that I live the life
    of a statue misplaced
    in the park where
    lovers break the law
    exposing themselves
    to each other and
    inadvertantly to me
    yet, I have seen
    love in it's nakedness
    kissed it on it's moist cheek
    and made love to love
    'til she came and
    blessed the world with
    an Obsidian cupid

    I fear not love
    I fear that love for me
    right now in between these
    sweeping second hands
    will not find me the way
    I see it

    my eyes are jaded not
    with "False Events Appearing Real"
    but the numbness of my fingertips
    to touch so
    feeling you would be impossible
    and to love you / feel you
    I must /

    and right now I only have
    four senses.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb

    "I have seen
    love in it's nakedness
    kissed it on it's moist cheek
    and made love to love
    'til she came"


    ****, now I know you FEAR nothing. To see love in its nakedness and make love to love til she cums.... Whoa!!!
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well alrighty then....

    point taken.....!

    Definitely Unique...! :wink:
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queens N2UrSoul and Ubzorbshun,

    So much love from ya'll. Dang, I must be somebody! Okay, I'm trippin' but you two know I appreciate your words.

    one love,blak
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your flows are real!!!

    this here is reality for me:

    I fear that love for me
    right now in between these
    sweeping second hands
    will not find me the way
    I see it
     
  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank ya'll!!!

    one love,blak
     
  7. MzNappi

    MzNappi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now this is something

    the last line of your poem
    is almost the title of my novel

    *illbedamnifgreatmindsdontthinkalike*
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB....

    *a profound message... indeed!

    i'm always&4eva lovin' what you do. from this day
    forward you shall be referred to as...
    "My Royal Blak-ness"! :)

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
  9. byin

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    ur messin' wit my senses
    and i sense ur
    spirit ...hesitates
    ova this message
    t.r.u.t.h.
    To Release Unbiased Teachingsthat Heal.

    byin
     
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    A Blackverb Master Peace Of Great Wisdom Teach My King.