Black Poetry : i dreamed of you

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  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was floating on a raft in the middle of
    a small lake
    hazy summer sky
    cool breeze tripping across the tiny ripples
    caressing my hot glistening skin
    black sunglasses shading closed eyes
    wild hair
    no smile
    relaxing fom a long hard week
    enjoying the quiet recess of the afternoon
    allowing myself to be lulled to sleep
    by the sound of the birds nearby
    i dreamed of you
    touching me in my personal places
    your sweet aroma filling large dark spaces
    we hide inside from the world
    you were making me smile
    kissing my neck
    touching my face
    making me remember what it feels like to
    explode inside
    then i opened my eyes
    from the daydream
    with the urge to
    rush home and make sweet love
    again.
     
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    dont you just love dat feeling---makin me wanna go home too!!!
     
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    there it is....

    thank you for the sweet dreams of home... :)

    alyce
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lurk: oh yeah!

    alyce: you know what i'm talkin 'bout!!

    -7:spinstar:
     
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    got me bout to close up and head home after i fell
    into dis daydream.......and all i wanna do is go home
     
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    seven.


    i am lovin' this!! it was like a short story...
    & i hated for it to end!! but isn't that the
    case with most good thing?? :lol:

    thank you for sharing your daydream. :)

    itsallLoved, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich... go head on then!

    elayne... i'm glad you enjoyed it, elayne!

    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Wildflower7- What a lovely float by. This was so serene and cool, until you got HOT! (lol)
    A VERY ENJOYABLE READ! :)
     
  9. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gaylee: lol... you ain't lyin bout it gettin hot!
    it be's like that sometimes!
    -7
     
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    i loved this too
    because this is a piece most adults can feel

    and i even explode too from reading this piece

    I LOVEDIDED IT

    DSS
     
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