Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by AHMOSE, Apr 2, 2005.
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Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ Encore...I absolutely loved this poem.
it's a beautiful dream not wasted but alive and well
i see through this dream reality someday
Whoa!! Makin me stand up and take notice, poet. Powerful imagery and so so tight write.
"A dream is a very powerful thing
If you sit down & think about what it means"
My goodness, yes, especially if the dream encompasses all the glory you expressed here. So much beauty and power in these words.
A POWERFUL DREAM ... A REALITY IN ONES SOUL TO EXPRESS THOUGHTS NEVER SPOKEN ... KEEP DREAMING ... AND THEN TELL US ABOUT IT ... AWESOME JOB
I walked in the same shoes with you, in your dream
at lease, when I read it, that's how it seem...
in the mist of us walking together, in this beautiful scene
I sure wish reality ...would enter this dream
awesome piece poet, this was a dream worth sharing, and thanks
I thank you all for taking the time to read this piece. I hope that you left with something after reading it.
very nice drop poet
its great to dream
Im still dreaming....
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