Black Poetry : I dream of US

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  1. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I rested I dreamt of us
    In miniature form of course
    She was perfectly molded
    With the smoothest mocha skin
    Slanty eyes rounded with delight
    As her"daddy!" walked in
    All laughs and giggles when
    you blow air bubbles on her tummy
    Sweet kisses from lips shaped
    like mine but big and juicy like yours
    Wigglind down your body, little hand
    tugging your big hand, "daddy, daddy...
    come play dolls with me!"
    You smiled at her and swung her around
    and told her you would be upin minute
    Then it was my turn, your kisses still
    left butterflies in my stomach, but wait it
    could just be our son moving around in there
    Your kiss was so passionate yet tender as
    you carressed my swollen 8 month belly...
    The moment was perfect, I didn't want it to end
    "Hi- Yah!!!!", 'Man-Man' had slipped down the stairs
    silently and kicked you in the back of your leg ;)
    I broke away from your embrace laughing as
    you scooped him up holding him by his ankles
    and tickled him relentlessly...
    I sat back staring at my two favorite
    men playing and wrestling on the floor
    At 6 Man-Man looked just like you
    The same chocolatey skin, the same slim
    figure, the same soul searching-honest eyes,
    even his shape up was tight just like his dad
    Right in the middle of my day dream Amiyah
    launched herself off the bottom step onto your back
    "I thought you were gonna play wiff me daddy", she accused
    "Nobody but me can beat up my brova", is what she said
    while slinging punches and trying to duck your tickles
    So I got down to help you out, I playfully tugged at Amiyah's
    pigtails and tickled her little 3 year old feet while she squirmed...
    Then I woke up to the sun shining in my eyes
    but a smile was on my face
    Can't wait until this dream becomes a reality.
     
  2. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was sweet and unique, i like the scene of this drope, i was feelin it, i dream of me and my lova as well...lol
    so flow on wit nonstop

    *blackluv and bp*
     
  3. TreasureEyes

    TreasureEyes Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow ChocolateAngel especially .....
    Your kiss was so passionate yet tender as
    you carressed my swollen 8 month belly...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow....this took me right into your dream
    as i was envision by all the joy and beauty
    instilled within this piece..........................
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so beautiful!!!!
    Hold on...
    ...I gotta get a tissue.
    So pretty.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    dang

    i thought this was real but it's dream

    well i hope you dreams come true

    sounds like you KNOW what you want


    peace poet
     
  7. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for all the love on this piece poets. This dream was so vivid i just had to put it in writing. I'm glad I was able to make you all see what i was feeling.
     
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    I coouldn't help but smile while reading this one. Great job.

    Key-L
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice sentiment--also revealing--well done--Amun-Ra
     
  10. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, thanks family for all the love. This dream was so vivid I just had to share. And I'm happy I was able to let you feel what I felt.
     
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