Black Poetry : I Dream In Color

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  1. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Long time no see Destee...i haven't been able to visit as much as i would like to, but i enjoy readin all the good poetry when i do come on, tho i don't reply to all, i love them all....anyway, here's something i'll leave until the next time i drop bye....876 peace 876 :skate:

    I Dream In Color

    do not be blinded
    by the color on this page
    for it is only my dreams

    My dreams are in color

    they’ve been stained with the earth and the life of my people
    Covered by the blood of the dead and the unfair
    Giving a mixture of my soul…a swift breath to my spirit

    Allowing my dreams color

    color withstanding the hatred of this world
    surpassing the confusion of the life that is me
    consuming the freedom
    that is the hope
    That is the treasure

    To this dream in color.

    No longer can the dream be just white…blue or red…
    Through the multiple hearts, there is a depth in the black
    that finds its way out of my being and into your mind…
    At this moment
    I am conversing my essence with u

    So do not be afraid of the color on this page
    Nor be intimidated by the legacy that is in each word
    It is only what I can write…
    Of myself…of my understanding…
    and in this reality, all I know is my dreams

    my dreams
    in color….


    "This is Word From Prizefighter16 a.k.a Mz.Soulll"

    (c)copywritten2005
    Rashawna Wilson....Bye yall..
     
  2. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On the real I like this piece I'm just glad your not all into one thing. Big ups ma
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice drop nice to see ya in flow again.
     
  4. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Defiantson....

    thanks brutha...lol, im glad u can see im not all into one thing...

    keep the flow goin...and good luck with ur title

    Rich...

    always appreciate ur insight brutha...thanks...i'll be writing as long as this computa keeps working.


    Peace...
    this is word from mz. Soulll aka pf16
     
  5. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice work....glad that you're back
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Knock em out Prizefighter. That was nice and came across strong yet calm.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And your words were so vivid that I could almost see the color of those dreams. So nice to be reading you again.
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love

    Mz.Poetic...thanks for reading my poetry sis, and thanks im glad to be back

    Wisdom7...thanks, lol, thats exactly how i wanted the poem to be, strong and calm, thanks for reading the poem...keep the flow goin

    Watzinaname...thanks, nice to always hear ur insight, thanks for reading this...


    thanks for readin my poetry, and for givin love....keep the flow goin
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can see a rainbow in that dream of yours, peace.
     
  10. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for takin the time to read the poem 1poetsought, always enlightened by ur commentary....lol, bless

    keep the flow goin
     
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