Quiet Poetry Lounge : I dont worry....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Jul 28, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not to long ago….
    You took my hand and shown me the way
    Uplifted and made me believe in you and I
    Gave me faith…showed me to love again
    Touching my mental…
    Placing me in a brand new world….
    Loving me free and unconditional
    Never thought I could find that peace of mind
    But you gave it to me…open heart
    Meaning of love you posed and I took the rose
    Bathe me in your love….as white ivy flows
    in the wind…Upon a rainbow of us….
    For there is no other better then you..
    In my eyes
    And my heart cant resist…..
    Your soul took over mine
    As our love grow and spread the air
    You make me smile in my dreams
    As we connect in mid air
    In a hush…our hearts kiss
    Moving to a new level…
    Taken me to a depth in time
    For we only can hold
    So I dont worry....
    You touch me

    (C) 2004
    DBDH....Creation​
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Correct, ...there's no need to worry...for what he brought out of you...was already in you..."asleep" :sleep: ..he simply, woke it up.
    this was an awesome piece and I enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing.
     
  3. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel....

    Now that's deep...because...that's love.

    :thanks: for being you...and sharing you with us.

    :toast:
     
  4. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :toast: You are rolling with the love poems I see.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with queent, what was brought out was already there to begin with, perhaps it just had to be reminded that it existed. Sweetly flowed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt scribe here from ya heart
    feeling u on dis
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queentswana....true...he help meand you can say :wink: thanks

    Monetary..:grouphug: thank you

    jazzymoonchild...thanks again sis

    watzinaname..thanks for the read

    $$RICH$$..feeling me huh? :love: thanks for the love
    yup blushing...:kiss:

    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, angel, this is pure beauty. Very nice.
     
  9. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply beautiful Angel. That was nice. Brings good feelings when I read it. Thank you for sharing. :x:
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you gempis

    thank you kente417mojo..for reading glad you feel the vibe

    Peace
    Angel
     
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