Black Poetry : I DON'T WANT TO

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  1. FINDLOVEnMEback

    FINDLOVEnMEback Member MEMBER

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    I don't want to talk about it, think about it, scream about it or fight about this anymore

    I don’t want to feel it, live it, or stay depress about it like before,

    I want you to go back to where you last laid your head,

    Go back to the lies that pleasure you in bed,

    Go back to the woman that seduced your loins at first sight

    Your destruction OF US, WILL NOT CAUSE ANYMORE DISRUPTIONS in my life

    Tonight I am going to move on,

    live long, and stay strong, despite your wrong,

    You did not create me; therefore I won’t let you make me

    into this insecure Monsters, chasing your whereabouts,

    walking around,looking crazy drowing in self pity, creating self doubt

    I Don’t Needs you,

    Don’t want, So leave me alone

    Let me make this clear to you

    I’LL BE OK being ALONE

    Don’t call me, text me, or Ring my bell,

    Let me sum this up for you

    Go to He!%

    See, I am not going to talk about you,

    or think about her, anymore

    I have chosen to move on, live long and be strong, just like before

    but this time, despite your wrong,

    I will survive this, because I refuse to live in it


    and you shall become a thing of the past,

    because this, like you, will not last,
    but will soon, pass me over




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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    without any doubt it will pass over in time
    you will rise live and shine
    great release from such lying
    a stronger you with a new sign
    how devined to get away from such play
    I feel you here more then you know i've been on this road before.

    drop it str8 and let it be heard ..........
     
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    When enough...

    is enough... its enough.

    I like how you ended on a positive note.

    Time wears down pain, we just have to be patient and allow it to pass.


    Thanks for sharing your expression with us.

    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    Nuff said :cool:
    Keep on venting sister
    Im sure in time a sister as strong as yourself will be just fine
     
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    The decision to be done with it, is not easy, I mean let's face it deception hurts, a broken heart hurts, and a change, even for the better, can be difficult. But I felt so much strength in these lines, and with each step you'll become even stronger. :)
     
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    that's right

    keep pressing on

    don't let people bring you down

    or

    hold you back

    like you said you'll be fine

    you can do bad all by your lonely i think is the saying

    peace
     
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    "I can do bad all by myself" and "I was doing just fine before I meet you" and "thanx for the lesson" is what I normally say when it's over but girl you said it alll so well right here. You lyrical captures that moment at the end of it. :welldone:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    knowing when to let it go...

    ...to walk away...to be your way...and not let the baggage of yesterday ruin your TODAY. too many of us, TODAY, have forgotten how to LET GO. we want to HOLD ON to things that, maybe, should never have began...because we've claimed something as OURS that we don't OWN...but even in our WRONGNESS, we want to handle this...when it's not ours to handle.

    WALKING AWAY is a nice day. tomorrow will be even better.

    THANK YOU.
     
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    yes baller u hit it on da head .....this piece say a lot and have walked me down my past
     
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    THIS IS SOMETHING THAT WE CAN ALL RELATE TO AT SOME POINT IN OUR LIVES. THIS WAS UNFORTUNATE BUT THE TRUTH OF THE PAIN CAUSED BY THE BETRAYAL OF TRUST AND COMMITMENT. I FELT THIS ONE DEEP IN MY CORE SIS. WHEW... VERY TOUCHING..
     
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