Black Poetry : I DON'T WANNA SAY IT

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BallOfConfusion, Mar 27, 2006.

  1. BallOfConfusion

    BallOfConfusion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dont wanna say that I am in luv

    But wat else am I 2 think

    Wen I cant eat.........

    Cant sleep.........

    Cant walk.........

    Cant write.......

    Cant chill......for a minute witout thinkin' of you

    I dont wanna say that I am in luv

    But wat else am I to think

    Wen were apart my heart is achein'

    Longing 2 B near you again

    I dont wanna say that I am in luv

    But wat else am I to think:

    I think I'm scared

    And afraid to try new things


    *This is the first poem I ever wrote-I've always said i wish i could write poetry but i wrote this poem wit ease....so plz be honest & tell wat u think
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If this is the first then don't let it be the last. For it was definitely a nice flow. Keep letting your emotions flow thru the pen
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed it's love when u can't eat think or sleep
    for feeling the rapid heart of one's lover ....
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    But you said it, and you said it well.......nice flow :)
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi BallOfConfusion...
    Welcome to the family...and I must say..
    I can relate to your piece poet, it's wonderful
    thanks for sharing.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think you've captured what quite a few people have felt...That head over heels feeling, that scares some so much, they run away from it. Welcome, and share some more.
     
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    BallOfConfusion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx everyone for posting ur thoughts and i will post more wen I write them
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome home
    That was a tight drop poet
    I was loving the flow
    There are so many reason to be in love
    That was plenty much love poet
     
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