Black Poetry : I dont wanna grow up..

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DaMMMmm..
    I dont want to grow up!
    Just thinking about it makes me want to ..
    :puke: throw up!

    Working a 9-5..
    Strugglin to get yours..
    all while trying to stay alive. :insane:

    I dont WANT to grow UP! :mad:
    You say im childish..
    but our just getting old.
    Old butt..
    prolly got mold! :eeek:

    Hush up!
    You wish you were like me,
    only worry in my mind,
    Shoppin at the mall,
    buying new nikes,
    rockin stilettoes.
    Sophisticated.. not ghetto! :cool:

    I aint gunna do it,
    get old.. use a piss pot,
    takin out my teeth,
    Singin "drop it like its hot" :grin:

    Nope not me...
    Lookin at old school hip hop..
    Outcast.. and 50 cent,
    all part of an era that was
    meant to be preserved..
    You talk of Teddy P. and Grace Jones,
    all that will be left of them is their bones. :tongue2:

    But I will remain.. digitally captured,
    Until I am raptured..
    Even then my face will hold,
    onto my youth.

    But me, I , MY CAndy Coated..
    Crack of my apple bottom,
    will always remain
    as bright and shiny as the day
    the doctor spanked me on it :blush: ,

    Imma stay young..
    cause im "too legint 2 quit"
    And I dont wanna grow up..
    Cause im still the shhhh**!
    :bellydance:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    can't grow up !
    dealing wit dis stuff
    rough guts whack butts
    twisted dents
    shoooots !
    i'm not wit it
    9 to 5 feeling alive
    craving for youth
    struct them lugz boots
    shopping for gear
    without fear or care
    coz i'm just there at that
    age ....Mom can i stay
    play and never grow up
    to the mist of untrust and
    love that rust at the glit
    like some misfit listen to
    jive live and slow tunes
    da room getting to small
    i don't wanna grow up !!

    you know tha sweet days
    done pass me by ...whewww!
    i'm just too ummm u know
    ole ...........shootssssss!!!!!!!!!!!

    can i go back there , can i ????
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rICH,
    yOU CAN COME WITH ME,
    I LOVE YALL OL' GEE'S
    THE BEAT IN YOUR FEET,
    THE WAY YOU SPEAK,
    YOUR SWAGGA..
    THAT MEANS STYLE..
    YOUR COCKY DEMEANOR..
    AND SMILE..
    COME WITH ME..
    OR TO YOUR GLASS HOUSE ILL COME,
    YOU BETTER GET HERE QUICK,
    CAUSE OLD AGE ABOUT TO
    GET YA HUN!

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I'll come under da sun
    me ole ain't got none
    i'm still a young one
    to a degree see coz
    i'z love young tender
    and sweet like thee
    so yep i'll come to V
    or in my glasshouse
    u can be where it be
    a we , not ready to
    rock in a chair
    pluck my teeth
    but be a rocker
    pac-man i aim to be
    but i don't wanna grow up
    learn all da stuff , worry about
    youth but cuddle up coz i'z
    like a baby good willing & ready
    not the chair but rock steady

    hey i don't wanna grow up
    not yet break sweat stuff
    like dat here i come !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your only as old as you feel....dont let the joy be taken and your gift of life shall always be....I like the scribe....Peace Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is a lot of responsibility with growing up. But if you learn from most of your mistakes instead of repeating them, that's half the battle...said like a true old head, lol. I really enjoyed this piece, it was a lot of fun.
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Agreed.. .. who says growing up is the only option.. im got a job interview with disney.. where i can work..and play.. at work.. lol.. i love my job its soo much fun!
     
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    this was so different and i loved it:)
     
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