Black Poetry : i dont understand

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Oct 16, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In my thoughts
    My love lay…
    Is it just a play…
    Soul searchin..
    Turned my wings ta white
    No longer gray….
    But is it just for play…
    Or do his heart actually sings….
    I lay down my heart…
    Do he walk over it…
    Or will he stay….
    My love is free….
    I took my vows…
    To only fly with him…
    But he got me in a maze…
    Emotions flowin…
    Emotions…
    Looking ta see…
    But now I am blind…
    I don’t understand….
    I took his offering…
    And said I do….
    In my thoughts
    My love lay…
    Is it just a play…
    Walkin in to da light
    Is he neglectin my love…
    I don’t understand…..
    I just don’t understand…


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  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm really likin' this...
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice..flow If the emotions are firing off you know that it's true.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt dis was emotional wit a mist
    feelin dis i've been there before
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LovelyGoldenOne..glad you like..thanks for the read

    HODEE...thanks fo readin

    $$RICH$$....glad ya feelin on dis...thanks fo da read...
     
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