Black Poetry : I Don't Know

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PLATINUMILLITY1, Nov 19, 2007.

  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A STILL LIFE IN THE WINDOW
    CAPTURES MY PERIPHERAL
    STRAPS ME IN
    FORCES ME TO STARE
    APPEARING SUCH COMELINESS
    ATONING WITH PULCHRITUDE
    ENDLESS......

    FEIGNING SHIFT
    BEFOULING THE PURIFICATION
    IT STRUGGLES WITH MY MIND
    IT FABRICATES MY DESIRE
    UNTRUE.

    INNOCENT APPROACH
    INTENSIFYING WRONGNESS
    CLUELESS?
    ...IGNORANT
    I RELINQUISH DISTRESS
    FEIGNING....

    COMBAT CONCEDE
    ENGAGED FOR FREEDOM
    FREEDOM FOR VITALITY
    VITALITY FOR ETERNITY
    ENGAGED FOR DEVOTION
    A GANA.......


    TO BE CONTINUED....MAYBE....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    seem like u know as u venture deeper .....looking for pt.2 on this one !

    a
     
  3. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU $$RICH$$

    WELL IT MIGHT BE A LITTLE WHILE
    MAYBE I WILL GO AS IT HAPPENS
    I HAVE TO WAIT AND SEE WHAT HAPPENS FIRST
    THEN I CAN SHARE MY TRIUMPH....
    I APPRECIATE THE LOVE

    ~PEACEANDLOVE~
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like you are on a positive course, letting each experience steep as you proceed. Quite a journey, Platinum.
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice :em3600: ...skrybe


    Ask Lord whats the next step..

    follow the highway Love..


    and think like Genisis...



    We are in victory......








    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
  6. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm lovin the journey that you are
    taking me on.
    Would love to hear more.
     
  7. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    APPRECIATED

    THANK YOU...
    THE LOVE IS INVESTED FAMILY.......:wave: .
     
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    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    Very deep and Intellecually insightful...........

    Had to grab the dictionary a couple of times!!

    you are a poet indeed.....
     
  9. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Grace

    Thank you Info-Moetry
    LOL... I am still learning...LOL
    I appreciate you
     
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