Quiet Poetry Lounge : I don't know

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ZaKiYa, Dec 12, 2002.

  1. ZaKiYa

    ZaKiYa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what 2 say anymore
    How many times can a person show their concern?
    How many times can a person say hello?
    How many times can a person reach out?
    How many times can a person get tired?
    How many times can a person get pissed off?

    How much?
    How much more can one mere mortal take?
    I don't know
    I don't know how long one can go on like this
    I don't know how one can keeping facing rejection
    I don' know how long one can receive no response
    I don't know how hard the burden of love is

    I do know
    I do know that in spite of all I still care
    I do know that I'm Divine
    I do know that I'm blessed
    I do know that patience is not easy

    I will know
    I will know in time
    I will know in time the heartache
    I will know in time how to accept
    I will know how to just let things be
    but
    In the cold light of day and the warm dark of night
    I will
    I do
    I think
    I feel
    I believe
    I trust
    I love
    and most of all I
    I have hope
    because
    I am a child of God
    so ... Hello and have a blessed day !!!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    how much more
    how long will it take

    we face dis thing daily
    and we try to understand at all
    da answers yet unknown!!
     
  3. Cheril N Clarke

    Cheril N Clarke Active Member MEMBER

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    ZaKiYa

    every time I read your work I'm blown away...I am really feeling this poem....

    I feel like I'm the author of it....in some aspects....it's deep and really touches me....FEELIN' IT!

    Keep it on ms....I got a feeling we'll be hearing more from you!!!!

    ~CNC
     
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