Black Poetry : i dont know what to say

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Apr 12, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stop Thief!!!!!
    Please Return My HEart!
    I dont know were to begin, Where to start!1
    Should I tell her "I love Her"
    Believe me this is true
    Should I tell her " I long for Her"
    I dont know what to do!!
    Maybe I let her know she's my Utopia
    There's no place I'd rather be
    Should I tell her Im wipped?
    But not by her " P"
    Should I tell her it's everything that captivates me
    Her style, her class, that tight little ***
    Excuse my french, but she's got me that bad
    Mystifying , mesmerizing, yet plain and simple
    Even when she smiles; Her cute little dimples
    That twinkle in her eye lights up my world!
    A stare so sweet and sensual, like an innocent young girl
    I guess when I look at it she's really know theif at all
    Simply a women of substance, that has heard my call!!
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this

    soul sweet is love poetry!


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the romance in the air, very sweetly written.
     
  4. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks, Thkns

     
  5. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woah somebody got the Jones in they bones lol I like :jumping: :jumping: this
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow

    I can't say nuthin but !!!!WoW!!!!
    This...was a very nice poem....This was just.....WoW....


    WoW

    Wow


    Nita
    :heart:
     
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    Lovin the "stop thief" part especially. :shades:
     
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