Quiet Poetry Lounge : I Don't Know (the RoYaL BLaK remix)

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There he sits & I don’t know why
    I… am continuously set adrift… with
    each & every movement of his lips
    as he sips from myne & I don’t know
    why when he says my name it’s as if
    I’m hearing music for the very first tyme
    I lose my breath… I am left speech-less
    & my totally blown mind is in a
    desperate race to find where he could
    have possibly hidden my heart
    I don’t know why I am sweetly
    set adrift… & I don’t know why I want
    to look in his eyes… take him in-side &
    seamlessly experience heaven & earth
    loving-ly collide as we arrive… together
    I don’t know why… & it doesn’t really
    matter… all I know is that I am
    irreversibly affected by his presence &
    he has been indelibly etched on my
    mental… his beautiful essence touched
    me somewhere… I don’t know when…
    but I felt it… I don’ t know why.

    © SunShyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GO ON WITH YOUR BAD SELF!!!!!!!!!!! I DON'T KNOW WHY.....THIS IS off da chain. sister do yo' thang....I likes I likes.

    "10"

    verb
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SUNSHYNE!! SUNSHYNE !!!

    DON'T KNOW WHY
    BUT THE LOVE OF HE
    ITS COMFORT AND SWEETLY
    DONT KNOW WHY
    SO COME TO ME....

    SOMEBODY HAD TO DO IT SO WHY NOT ME...!
    LOL:D :heart:

    GURL DES WAS SO U AND TYGHT ....LOVIN IT
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLaKnEsS. you be da one dats bad my
    brotha! :) i'm glad you likes... since you do tend to inspire
    me... GREATLY!

    $$RICHNE$$. you know it's ALWAYS pure bliss
    when you stop by!! :) thank you for the Love, My Love!
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunny

    I don't know why but this was smoove like a bowl of creamy cheeze gritz gurl. Glad you back up in here sis.



    One
     
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    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunshyne (Even though I don't show it, you should always know it, that you keep Georgia on my mind) :) ....

    It's been a long time, but I just want you to know that I am still very much in awe of your talent. (I'm waiting for some of it to rub off on me) Keep on sending the shine, and we'll keep loving the inspiration you bring.

    A Tarheel Poet (Still Diggin Tha Shyne)
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nicely done, dear friend. lovin' yo love poetry...it's just lovely. keep on scribin' gurl.

    ~~~chaptersoflove~~~
     
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    I Don't Know(the RoYaL BLaK remix)

    :toast: :love: ;) OH ME OH MY, You go girl you are awesome . The words flow so......DAG WELLLLLLL.KEEP ON KEEPING IT REAL.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Zorbi. a bowl of cheese grits, huh? my sistah you
    are price-less!! & dats real! Much Love!!!!

    M. you are ALWAYS oh-so sweet to me! your responses
    alone leave me speech-less! thanks for the read!!

    Lister. i'm glad i could feed your love of da love
    poetry. it was indeed my pleasure, dear friend! :)

    BDD. awww ****! dere you go again! :) thanks for da
    read & da love... you almost got me this tyme!! (LOL)
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shyne

    Yallz 2 wurkin muh nerves... definitely an instant fav hea. your verbals are too tight! Good to see ya scribes again...

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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