Quiet Poetry Lounge : I Don't Know (GA dubbed)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jun 29, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There she is and I don't know
    why I...lose my breath...she
    has me searchin' for it on sandy
    shores after the tide has receded
    from blessing starfish and stones
    that....kids will skip and watch their
    dreams dance on the ripples......
    I don't know why I lose my breath
    when I see her...I don't know why
    I want to hold her I don't know
    why I want to kiss her from head
    to soul to heat from cold...103 degree
    feverish bliss and just get lost
    somewhere....with her....it doesn't
    matter where...I don't know why
    she has hostaged my thoughts and
    writes them down in "she"roglyphics
    on slabs of granite that she
    placed on the hill overlooking a sea
    of chrysanthemums that flowed to
    her breath....I don't know why...they seemed
    to enjoy her caresses as she lived
    and told a story with her calm breathing...
    that touched me somewhere...I don't know
    where...but I felt it...I don't know why.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLaKnEss....

    YOU, sir... are AmAzINg...

    you know dat ryght? (of course you do)

    i ain't got nothin' but love for ya! :)

    One.
    SunShyne~
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    verb

    you a bad man
    a very bad man

    and i ain't mad at cha playa

    Peace From Da Street
     
  4. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    You continue to push da art to da limit my brutha... tight indeed.

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    I KNOW THE GA_ WOMAN ARE AMAZING FOR THE SIMPLE FACT I AM ONE! WHOM SO EVER HAS YOU HEART FLOWING LIKE THAT NEEDS TO BE COMENDED! I MEAN NEVER HAVE HEARD SO HEART FELT OF WORDS. MUCH SNAPS MY BROTHER A TRUE BLak MAN. THIS IS A LOVELY PIECE AND I HOPE THAT GA_ GURL APPREICATES IT TOO...:toast: :toast: :toast: :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BLK VERB

    THIS POWERFUL EXSPLOSIVE PIECE
    SPEAK OF GENTLENESS SWEETNESS
    CARESSNESS OF A SOULFUL QUEEN
    I KNOW MY GURL LOVE DES HERE!!
    MAN U GOT MAD SKILLZ IN YO PEN.
    DO YO THANG (((LOVERBOY))):love: :toast:
     
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