Black Poetry : I Don't Know Do I Dare ?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Feb 9, 2004.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BlueWater Classic

    I knew you was there
    Without looking to see
    Because the atmosphere change
    When you are near

    I look up right into your eyes
    Then I cannot help but smile

    How did all this come about
    From a “hello how are you”
    To a “nice seeing you”

    It is not right
    I know this is so
    A forbidden fruit
    Stand before us
    a tale of lust
    has no love
    could there ever be more

    I don't know

    how did all this come about
    from a “nice seeing you”
    to a “can I see you”.

    My nerve ending is shoot
    As I want to so much
    To cross that border
    Of the forbidden zone
    To feel more of him
    Oh so much more
    The chills hits my body
    My hearts beat rapidly
    My mind screaming
    take me please
    As I smile so tenthly

    How did this all come about
    From a “can I see you”
    To a “I’ll meet you tonight”

    Is it because I let my guard down
    Or is this what I wanted
    All the time
    To feel the danger of the passion amor
    To feel what is called the unknown
    Do I dare go a step more?

    I don't know

    The story still is not told
    Will the chapter ever close

    Perhaps one day I will take the chance
    And endure in a fling of forbidden romance

    To take a chance

    I don't know
     
  2. cojamalik

    cojamalik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice!
     
  3. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah, that was sexy
    should i, should i not
    thoughts growing with it
    passionately the heat don't stop...

    One
     
  4. Nita

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    I know how you feel

    I mean I have found myself in that position many times...should I let him wax it or not:jawdrop:...lol
    I'm kiddin
    But I did enjoy this one
     
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    lovin this, sistah. very very tight flow.
     
  6. Bluewater

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    hi cojamalik for the love..i am glad you like :heart:

    hey Antar:laugh: yeah that is about right thoughts do heat the kettle:) thank you so much for the love:heart:

    Hi sister Nita ..:laugh: you so krazy..LOL:) thank you sister for the love:heart:

    hey sister gempis..I am so happy you like this scribe...thank you for the love:heart:

    Thank you family :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    from hello to can i
    is it good will it be bad
    many things flow
    in ya head
    how can it be
    this was tyte drop sistah Queen
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like the way you posed this, should I or shouldn't I, and if I do, will I regret it....something to ponder.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    do i dont i should i would i ...
    yes i dare to say...i liked it...
    thank you for it..
    and wonder at it..
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater...nice...very nice...

    blak
     
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