Black Poetry : ...i dont give a...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jan 14, 2006.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a song i wrote a few days ago...its a complicated situation but anyway...enjoy...


    Chorus:
    i dont give a d*mn what they say
    oh im gonna love you anyway
    i dont give a d*mn with at they do
    im so in love with you


    Verse 1:
    we've been throught **** together
    broke down, cried together
    broke each others hearts and we still wanna be together
    wiped each others tears
    wasted too many years
    but when i leave i see that im lovin' you forever still
    we've had arguments together
    said things we wish we hadn't
    think we dont love
    but i know i cant go without you
    true we ain't perfect
    but who is perfect
    nobody's like you and the more i deny the hurt lives


    Chorus:
    i dont give a d*mn what they say
    oh im gonna love you anyway
    i dont give a d*mn with at they do
    im so in love with you


    Verse 2:
    no one wants us to be together
    say we dont belong together
    but everytime we make love it feels perfect together
    know we got some problems
    but im willing to taunt them
    im willing to accept that our love can conquer all of them
    we've felt like **** together
    fallen and got up together
    screamed out all our anger and we still can't leave each other
    cuz you come back to save me
    and then i just cant leave
    "love conquers all", i'm finally understanding


    Chorus:
    i dont give a d*mn what they say
    oh im gonna love you anyway
    i dont give a d*mn with at they do
    im so in love with you


    Hook:
    they can say we wont last and
    i can say we will try and
    everytime i look in your eyes i
    know this is where my heart lies
    and i dont give a d*mn what they say
    cuz im gonna love you anyway
     
  2. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice song, Do you sing them as well?
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dam dam dam
    What the hell is this
    I love you gurl
    I need you gurl
    Where can we go
    Ill take you gurl
    I know you love me
    I know I love you
    I know you need me
    You know I need you
    This aint no time wait
    Ill give you all my love
    They dont want me to love you
    I say ill give you the world
    Dam dam dam
    Lovely you the one
    Speech cant talk
    Knees so weak
    I cant move
    I need you
    I want you
    cause......

    Chorus:
    i dont give a d*mn what they say
    oh im gonna love you anyway
    i dont give a d*mn with at they do
    im so in love with you
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the comments tantrum and cursed heart...
     
  5. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I bet this could make a number one hit.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhhh! my poetic sweetie
    u did it again surely this would
    sing deep and hit number 1 on da charts

    wow i love it , keep writing them , singing it .
     
  7. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dam
    why cant i just love you
    why cant i just show you
    you mean the world to me
    gurl drip your body in maybeline
    suck your body ill make you scream
    your man aint home i need you now
    i need you now i need you now
    call you up i sex you down
    freak your body keep making sounds
    turn that frown into a smile
    your my angel i love you now
    its to early but i love you
    third times charm i love you
    dam
     
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