Black Poetry : I dont Get It (Release My Mind)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Dec 16, 2006.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *I had to vent a bit*
    Uno


    Poetry pertrudes my veins
    I sweat melodies and shake off fear
    My words like venom hit harder than falling tears
    Yall scared to keep living but you wrestle with lions
    Poetry opens up the minds of the living
    My words deep enough to touch those that are dying
    And I dont get it

    Put my name in poetry slander my style
    Then you calling and crying like a child just died
    And im spitting some crap keeping your head gone
    Cause in reality you you would've given me (head) home
    And I dont get it

    My words are like lighting no rain needed
    No more drama I kick the dirt and roll up my sleeves and
    Im the pick of the litter im a playa to most and
    Yall in the way I stop calling by choice
    And
    I Dont
    Get when you tell a man you love
    I spit poetry from the brain
    Some write down love
    I have a plan A cause B is by choice
    I think yall salty cause I keep you moist
    I keep you going I dont need most
    You need a life and thats your choice
    I am a king when it come to flow
    I hustle sometimes and thats no joke
    See
    Poetry is more than who ryhmes best
    I flow with N-tell-I-gence
    So catch up haters your lungs might clog
    Im well winded-yall cloud the smog
    Im the King of poetry-Yall the :censored: on the ground
    My poetry is hate and love but thats what I found
    (right)
    See poetry too me is more than who feels it-More than replies
    Cause some just aint with it
    (see)
    Dont reply to me to make you feel like you down
    I might not reply to you and thats cause now

    I dont get it
    Your words are repitive at most
    Your rhetoric baby formula
    Im lobster by choice
    And as my dialogue gets better
    Your mind needs a stretcher
    Premiditated lyrics most cant handle the pressure....
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey tant i see ya spitting some fireya here. flo on poet!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    poetic words spill to canvas great write bruh !
     
  4. CREOLEQUEEN

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    Lovin ya word play! the mo u write the more N-Tell-U-Get!........ u know u something serious!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Tantrum
    Wow..yeah this drop is steaming
    release can come with the help of the flow
    so let it flow
    much love to you

    Peace & Love
     
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    tyte release poet...word

    one love
    khasm
     
  7. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Relax Relate Release... kewl flow:spinstar:

    Peace
     
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