Black Poetry : I Don't Feel So Good

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't feel so good;
    the weather outside --
    drizzlin' down dismal
    drops of devoid pain

    I don't feel so good;
    my head hurtz
    eyez r blurred and pinkish-red
    neck iz stiff
    chest feelz tight
    ...oh how my heart even aches

    I don't feel so good;
    stomach in knotz
    can't keep nothin' down
    kneez are knocked
    thighz feel tense
    **** calves and feet
    are botherin' me

    and I don't feel so good;
    being lovesick has got me
    experiencin' a
    hazy shade of
    grey-blue
    but tain't nothin' my
    doctor can do
    ...not even the warmth of
    sunshine on a clear day...

    Looks like I'm just gon'
    have to sweat this
    one out ~


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2....

    Oh My Sister!!... i am experiencing the early
    effects of this sickness myself! so i can dig
    it... wit 3 mutha f@#$in' shovels! :lol:

    hang in there Boo! its Always Darkest before the Dawn!
    (Pun Intended!!) :)

    AlwaysPeace.
    SunShyne~
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Did someone say Dawn.....

    GA -- you are somethin' else sis'!

    As usUal, I know you are right there
    feelin' me! Thank you for that!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    FROM THE BLUE MIST
    IN THE LOW LIGHT
    AS I COME TO U WIT
    HEART AND LOVE
    TOUCH YA BODY WIT CARESSES
    RUB YA MIND WIT BEAUTY
    AND MEND THE HEART
    MY GENTLE WHISPERS FLIP
    DA SCRIPT AS MY DEPTH
    GIVE U LIGHT TO MAKE THINGS
    ALRIGHT CUM IN FLIGHT MY SWEET
    BUT I FEEL YA
    I GET DES WAY SOM'TYME
     
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    i wanna...

    i wanna go outside...in the rain.:(

    i'm intimately acquainted with the illness of yours.
    only time can see you through the falling debris
    of foul emotions and past memories of yesterday.
    but, when the sun shines again
    the world will seem better in the end.

    THANKS FOR SHARING.
     
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    Thandiwe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now I Understand

    Now i understand why you are feeling "Love's Imagination". I guess it just must be the time of the year. and all this **** rain ain't helping either. ;)

    even in the "rainy" season
    there is life springing up...
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mr. Flyght...

    Ya' know I appreciate you Boo!

    Come take me away
    in your armz
    2 night
    make my troubles
    disappear beyond
    the clouds
    starz and the
    glaze of
    midnight's
    air ~
    soothe my aches
    and painz
    prescribe your
    richness to
    only me
    make me well
    and renewed
    kisses
    hugz
    touches
    caresses
    strokez
    and your
    eye glances
    too...


    Thank you dear brotha
    for this dance!
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller

    I sure hope itz as good
    as you painted....
    I wanna feel better Boo~

    Thanks for sharing your
    sentiments!!
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thandiwe~

    Sista friend..... you know how it is...
    ~ Lucifer's illusionz of love
    create hallucinationz of illness,
    and by the time your mental mid-brain
    cues in, then reality says
    "you are hurtin' here in your stomach,
    you are hurtin' here in your chest,
    you are hurtin' here in your legz" and so
    forth...
    It's a trip.... yes, "Love's Imagination"
    do be running wyld mami!

    Thank ya' girl....I'll call ya' this
    week so we can go get our "read on"!
     
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