Black Poetry : I dont feel good..... lord somthing is wrong here..

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dont feel good....
    There is something not right here....

    somthing does not feel right here...
    oh no....
    it has nothing to do with a man....
    or a dissapointment of a man....
    cause i,m used to that...
    and he makes things new...
    cause i know my king is out there...
    and is not....
    let gods will be done..

    its Gods will shall be done..
    and i leave everyone who is not clear behind...









    no....
    no...

    its about...
    sisters and brothers ...
    saying i love you ..
    but than i feel sumthing...
    hitting in my chest


    there is sumthing verry wrong here.....
    verry wrong here...


    somthimes you have this feeling...
    that feeling ....
    that people dont show who they realy are...



    God if this is treu what my feelings are telling me..
    what my eyes are showing me...
    than who can i trust now.....


    people talking for me...
    not hearing my story...
    say they wanne protect me..
    Protect me with truth..
    the real truth ..
    not half truth..
    believe me i can handle the truth...


    No
    this is dirty....
    Give me wings lord...
    heal my pain....
    and please ...
    this time..
    show me that i,m wrong....


    in stead of right.....









    Sisters and brothers....
    now one has to prove himself...
    at least not to me...


    time will show....



    who walkes in real love.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho nuff true love will shine from the heart
    and it will be the will of God's love time will tell
    speak on sis.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice scribe...yes indeed in Gods time your King will come and walk in true love.....Angel
     
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    People wear many masks. Hard to know which face is real, sometimes we have to rely on God's wisdom to show us. I liked the way you posed this. Flow on.
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich:heart: yes gods love will always shine trough..
    thanks angel:heart: yes jezus the king will come.. cause this aint about the a man..

    thanks wats:heart: yes i believe everyone has been there somthimes..









    man i,m tired...




















    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a very sincerely written peace...
    continue to trust in the one, to whom,
    all your strength and insight is given.

    Peace & Blessings
    Sage
     
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