Black Poetry : I Don't Care!

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  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't care anymore
    Someone ripped me apart and tore!
    All I feel is the pain and anger
    Void of any vigor!
    The last rose pedal dropped heard
    As I got robbed of my heart!
    All I see is resentment
    As all my love went!
    I sit in the rain
    And I feel myself go insane!
    The lightning flashes
    Cutting deep slashes!
    The water flows over
    I don't take cover!
    I hear screams
    I wish it was a dream!
    It was sunny before
    But I just don't care anymore!
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm...uhmm, one love, i like the flow of this piece, gurl. i can relate, i feel ya, remember that yo poetry is therapy. i'm still watchin', keep on scribin'.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ONE_LOVE

    IT'S TYME TO TAKE FLIGHT
    UPON THE LOVE OF I AS I
    CARESS YA SOUL HOLD U BOLD
    EASE YA MIND AND MEND YO HEART
    GIVE U LOVE AS U WALK ON THE PEDALS
    OF MY RED ROSES.... FORTH I CARE
    YA ART IS A GUIDE OF MANY STARS
    AS I FLY MY SKIES OF LOVE I SEE U
    WATCHING U AND NOW I KNOW U
    FLOW HEAD BABY!
     
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    Almost...

    ...a saddening affect. A, very, intense piece, scribe. *Feelin' this*
     
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    intense indeed!!!

    been there! however, with prayer you will bounce back...
    I am a witness to that. If I can, ANYBODY CAN!!!:)
     
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    feeling every beat of this ,surely wit faith ur ova-come it.
     
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    We don't feel empty forever, though during that time it feels like an eternity. Feeling this flow.
     
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    the emptiness that a person feel sometimes can get the down. but one must pray for the rain to end. and pray for better days flow on poet.
     
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    Deep Poet
    I like the flow of it
    Emptiness whoa sometimes I have this feeling
     
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    Hi onelove
    yeah i'm feeling the sadness and the hurt
    it is good to let it go
    to release Much Love
    very deep scribe

    Peace
     
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