Quiet Poetry Lounge : I don’t want

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Apr 11, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Share my life
    Take me for who I am
    The colors of the
    Rainbow will never change
    Not of a dream…not a fantasy
    But me…in the real
    As my heart beats only because
    You place the passion inside…
    Wipe the pain and took my hand
    I don’t want to hurt no more
    My soul healed my spirit
    Got me singing a free melody
    No more blues…
    But will you stay
    I don’t want to hurt no more…
    My life came alive
    Since you walk in it
    Not trying to live around you
    But you’re the big change in
    My life….and I just
    Don’t want to hurt no more…
    Thriving was never in my heart
    Conquering all my fears…
    Living alive I feel…like never before
    As my love flows
    So free unto you…never knew
    The pain will go away…..until
    I meet you….
    I don’t want…
    I don’t want to hurt no more

    2004 :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt scribe feeling da pain & emotions floating here
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm sure your voice was heard...from the :heart: ...in which it came...
    To the :heart: in which it's going.
    love is in the wings...just waiting to unfold.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Nice smooth flow, I likes
     
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    Hoping for a free and blissful life, sounds like eden.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall for the love
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    I do feel ya on this one, sis. Very tight drop.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    The effect of someone walking into your life is beautifully expressed in this piece. Job well done.

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    very nice flow sister'
    wonderful scribe
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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